Old meme that I keep coming back to while my brain putters around and makes a silent fool of itself. Which it does far too regularly for my liking, but howandever:
Pick a paragraph (or any passage between... let's say 200 and 600 words) from anything I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
PS: Are shoulders supposed to go click-snap-dead-arm? On the one hand, there was this rush of almost release, like a pressure was suddenly gone, on the other, my little finger is still numb -_-; I have a feeling this should worry me ...
Pick a paragraph (or any passage between... let's say 200 and 600 words) from anything I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
PS: Are shoulders supposed to go click-snap-dead-arm? On the one hand, there was this rush of almost release, like a pressure was suddenly gone, on the other, my little finger is still numb -_-; I have a feeling this should worry me ...